Comments : I Am More Than Robotic

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    There is so much i wanna say about this poem. Ive read it numerous times and dont know where to start.

    ........

    The part about inky sentiments paving the artists way, just beyond words to me!!!

    I love the way you mix science within your poetry. The way you describe the molecule as not dusty just unused....so profound!

    Then the line about life cutting your throat before the doctrines can be written ...absolutely mind blowing!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Natusha

    "
    I used to survive
    with an awkward heartbeat
    gorging with uncontrolled
    emotions....
    and those inky sentiments
    paved an artist's way
    to realizing who and what
    I honestly loved.
    "

    I'm trying to browse through poems and find words that linger in my head an create a voice for themselves, create a batch, create a whole ideology on how things managed to be the way they are. This poem touched base. It's really rare when you find the kind of poems that triggered that voice of recognition in your head. This poem has imprinted a voice in my head.