I thought this was stellar
Showed fear, determination, conviction, and finally success. Every line gave the reader another feeling..The final line was YEAH as success was found
Excellent

Oh this is so amazing. I loved this poem.

Coming from such a beautiful inspiration. I don't think I could ever do it. At first I thought that this person was actually dying or something but I realised I was wrong.

I had butterflies in my tummy as I was reading it with the idea of falling like that even with protection. Argh :| lol

Awesome write!

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Intriguing piece from start to finish. I love the mystery your words paint....I honestly didn't know where this was going.

Such raw emotion throughout its entirety...well done!