I read your latest few poems and it is obvious that you are utterly hurt and probably disappointed to, partly at yourself party because of that other person. The emotions you fill your poems with are raw and heartwrenching and you definately have strong feelings for that someone, love at first which is now turning into something negative. I just miss imagery, but that is just my opinion. I hope things get better soon

Great poem, yes sometimes we do look to others for the strength to carry ours dreams but eventually we find that its have been us all alone who have been carrying the load. I like how this piece ends it shows those who read this poem that it take courage to admit that you're hurt, but more importantly to let go. Feel better..

Great poem