U are all i see

Short sweet love jingle...The only input I can give on this one is to tighten up your syllables a bit

I've never felt this way before
It's all brand new to me
My head is spinning,I can't breathe
You're all I see.

^^^ Your count is 8,6,8 then 4 in the last line...but add 2 more syllables to the last line like this

I've never felt this way before
It's all brand new to me
My head is spinning,I can't breathe
You're all that I can see.

Now its 8,6,8,6, and the last line flows with the rest of the lines better...especially important in your rhyming pieces :)

Keep writing!
Lostlove~