by Timothy Mar 8, 2012
category :
Life, society /
about society
Bid me, and your Sally Joe, |
Flowing and creative. I enjoyed reading it and got lost in your words and rhyme. Excellent |
by Lifeless Doll
This is amazing, I can't believe the use of words you do, it's unbelieavable, very creative and inspiring :) |
by Karla
What a wonderful flow! Perfect piece Tim bro. Loved it. |
by Lioness
I quite like the rhyming that you have and the words make me feel like I am reading some poem that was written many, many, many years ago (like in Shakespeare time). |
by Decayed
I was reading, enjoying the tempo, and your powerful language... until I got lost trying to perceive... but you know, whatever this is about, it sounds awesome (I know, you're saying now: what a fool :P haha.. just shoot me a pm about the general idea, please? :P) |