Dying is Free

by Jack Nightengale   Mar 8, 2012


The river runs red,
Yet it flows like the sea,
The movement has left and the body is dead,
The darkness is the only thing to see.

Bruise after bruise, fighting to stay alive,
With each new wound, leaves more concern,
Dying but, smiling just to help others survive,
The body feels cold but, by touch it starts to burn.

Slowly fading, fearing that the soul is already lost,
Crying out, desperately making a dying plea,
Taking this lightly left this deadly cost,
Dying is the only thing that's free...

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  • 12 years ago

    by kida

    Slowly fading, fearing that the soul is already lost,
    Crying out, desperately making a dying plea,
    Taking this lightly left this deadly cost,
    Dying is the only thing that's free...

    ^^^ definately my favourite part but absolutely love this whole poem had to read it three times because it was too amazing to only read once.

    fantasticly written

  • 12 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Very emotional...love it :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is a really good poem! I love it!! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by The Ninja

    Nice job.

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