Its not free for those that are left behind they pay the price for loss its still a great poem tho 5/5 from me

No not really i do argree with her very good

This had put tears in my eyes cuz I know wut you r goin through:(
Great poem:) 5/5

Must be a hard life, I am near to give you a bg warm hug, and letting you know friendships golden heart, I hope it is just a very powerful poem, not reflexting real life, that would be to cruel

Trult fantastic poem, and its meaningful too. I agree with dallas, that its those left behind that pay. I'm always here, but you already know that. Loved the poem! 5/5!

Amazing poem. 5/5

I love diss poem lol!

Amazging Babii(:
5/5 x

Nyc piece i enjoyd t readin

Wowie!! ( :

Amazing write. lots of emotion, good job

Wow this is really good. i love it :)

Nice job.

This is a really good poem! I love it!! 5/5

5/5

Very emotional...love it :)

Slowly fading, fearing that the soul is already lost,
Crying out, desperately making a dying plea,
Taking this lightly left this deadly cost,
Dying is the only thing that's free...

^^^ definately my favourite part but absolutely love this whole poem had to read it three times because it was too amazing to only read once.

fantasticly written