Very strong in emotions and in imagery although i wonder why you would kill yourself over a man or a woman? life is full of pain and that includes heartbreak dont' worry there will be more men in your life salinas more worthy of you don't you forget life is just a mistery and we have to discover it okay?

Very strong in emotions and in imagery although i wonder why you would kill yourself over a man or a woman? life is full of pain and that includes heartbreak dont' worry there will be more men in your life salinas more worthy of you don't you forget life is just a mistery and we have to discover it okay?

Trust my baby she ant lieing

Very heartfelt, the most inportant things in a poem is letting your feelings out the best you can

Kinda reminds me of how I write my poems definatly a 5/5 keep up the awesome work.