by Meme Mar 9, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Only because you're my tragedy |
Very cool you are becoming the format queen:) keep it up we love it |
by Decayed
Absolute brilliance! I just got the double amount I get from the sadness in any piece. Short, but so heavy and rimmed with melancholy. |
by Chelsey
I absolutely loved this! I love Triolets! I find forms like this very hard to do because a lines have to be repeated and each time they have to still make sense throughout your poem..You did a very good job with this! Sad story behind it :/ |
by Tara Kay
Nice piece Meme, very relatable and sad write, great choice of form, the triolet is a good piece |
The triolet is an excellent choice to deliver this emotional drama that most of us can relate to |