The triolet is an excellent choice to deliver this emotional drama that most of us can relate to

Nice piece Meme, very relatable and sad write, great choice of form, the triolet is a good piece

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I absolutely loved this! I love Triolets! I find forms like this very hard to do because a lines have to be repeated and each time they have to still make sense throughout your poem..You did a very good job with this! Sad story behind it :/

Absolute brilliance! I just got the double amount I get from the sadness in any piece. Short, but so heavy and rimmed with melancholy.

I can sense the inspiration from Christina Perri's "Tragedy".

LOVE IT, amazing Meme.

Very cool you are becoming the format queen:) keep it up we love it