Fight for your place in good fate
If not you will soon fade
Avoid becoming yet another stranger
Risk yourself don't become a danger

I like the message of the poem , ilove the sense of loyalty you are trying to portray, its a lovely poem and I really appreciable the ending....

'Chose well if you look for a wife "

good poem and makes you think....:)

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Love this great poem

Hi Both

Love your comments, they are so kind and lovely