Awww being alone sucks:(
But I like the poem:)

Ole, I think your poem needs a few commas to break the wording up , as well as the use of different words you had a lot of repetition....however I love the idea behind this. Describing your lonely, which is usually a sad feeling, but here your lonliness is just anticipation waiting to see the one u love...I liked it! :)

Hi dear women

feel free to set commas and resent to me, I really appriciate you kind comments

This poem is quite sad. I hate the idea of being alone and you have expressed it well

x

Hi Lioness

Thanks for this comment and your suport