Left me speechless and breathless!
Such a sad piece, but really poetic. I loved the rhyming scheme, and just the sheer emotion!

Amazing job girlie! 100/100!

I can't agree less with the first speaker..really made a genius in this! Ride on..

It's a sad poem... nice poem. good job! 5/5 :)

Can i steal it and put it on my facebook wall ? xD

AMAZING! I really loved and enjoyed reading this,,fantastic everything and most definitely my favorite that I've read from you,,,delightful an great and it and i most definitely relate as probably dose many others and i loved every line an stanza in this poem,,, i love love loved it and it seems you've shown much improvement or you've just finally shined ur poetry soul...shinning like sunshine...AMAZING :) 5/5

Like always amazing!!! Message me if you want to talk you know I'm always here also please read some of my new stuff(: 5/5