Waltz with a Daisy

by Maple Tree   Mar 10, 2012


I bathed a soft
whisper within a
river of floating tears,
barren fingers danced,
twirling messages
In morse code
as a fallen leaf
rescues my
sadness,
granting me a
wish to waltz
with the daises
one last time....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh I love the opening few lines. It sounds so poetic and lovely. There is a hint of sadness within this beautiful poem. Loved the image of waltzing with daisies - awesome name to the poem

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Heavy

    Awwhh...Well-written! Everything seems so delicate and peaceful in this poem, especially the emotion behind it. It's sad but I find it really interesting and sweet how the enviornment is rather therapeutic for you. It's really nice, Maple! Lovely.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Yup I agree ur an amazing writer.
    I think ur poems reflects u, great poem Andrea, I love it.:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi
    I love this poem, even it is quiet sad it is filled with emotions and love

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Your poems go deep, they inspiring, sad and happy, soft and gentle, I am touched every single time. You are a master in writing

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