Missing someone hurts so much, and remembering that someone and wishing to see him/her is painful but also heartbreaking. This is good piece. I like how you were able to create really good images in this poem.

I am speechless, nice poem

Very long to be honest it was worth the read. I espically loved your opening and cloasing stanza's.

5/5

I love the way you started and the ending were Brilliant
Gr8 job in there 5/5 keep on =)

The worst part about someone leaving is being reminded of that person with everything around you. I loved this poem because you really showed how much you would hurt if he left and this is just a thought about it, you can only imagine how it would be if he really did. I loved the imagery and my favorite lines in this poem were
"The girl that you've come to know now,
Would disappear along with you.
I'd be left with an empty shell of what I used to be.
And everyone would be able to see
that your absence is all over me."
This ending was amazing and suited up the poem well.

A long read but defnitely a good one , I like how you wrote it out like that and i know missing someone hurts so much. . . and remembering all the sweet memories and sometimes even the bad ones , keeps them in your heart, this poem is deeply pained, and I could really tell, nice work on this poem, once again :)

5/5