Comments : Logic of Beautiful~Senryu Chain

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    To me this is about forgetting the past, Maybe it's about a couple, he can't get over his previous lovers, his mind is turned to mud, or is he struggling to forget her previous boyfriends?
    Or have I missed the point?
    I like the imagery of 'untouched eyes'
    Short but nicely written
    There is not much more I can say.
    Apart from 'no nits!'
    Regards

    Darren