Comments : I Miss You

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    This is really touching. I thought it was gonna have a sad ending, but no. It's really beautiful :)

    Just some tiny errors I thought I'd state:

    "Best Friends Forever Is what we agreed,
    You were there when i needed to be free'd,"
    -> The apostrophe is not needed.

    "A few days went by and i still hadn't scene your face,"
    -> Sould be "haven't seen"

    Aside from that, it's an awesome poem :)
    5/5

    -X