We dont choose who to love, u tried ur best not to show ur love to that person, but ur falling apart.
This poem says a lot, how much love ur holding to him, ur true feelings.
Hope things get better:)
Great poem Rihanna:)

Loved your poem, you should check mine out and see if we relates to the same feelings.

Awwwhhhh... ):
Urgh! I thought that it was going to be cutesy as I read the beginning, but I should've known with the category it was in. :/ This is so sad, you poor thing! You made it clear that you already knew better and that you were guarded and they weasled their way in anyhow and ended up hurting you, as you suspected. -Frown- How disappointing...
I think you did a wonderful job writing this, though, hon!

It was sad but i no how it feels i really do. i loved someone my best friend n he tore my heart apart.

Again nice flow and its another good poem keep it up

Ouch :(

but i love it

i felt something like that before

Things go wrong to turn good @ last.. Ride on..

Wow girl this is really good i love it 5/5 :)

Cool poem chik :) 5/5

The rhythm is great and the poem stays on topic. great job, 5/5

Very sad, but beuatiful the way you construct words, and the poem it self great job girl :)

Sad and nice poem with great rhymes!

I know how you feel :)

I'm trying to not
let you see
how much
you mean to me.

I tried to not
let you in,
but somehow
you just win
<<favorite part

its hard to hide your true feelings sometimes :/

you described your emotions beautifully :]

i loved it :]]

5/5