by Sylvia
Olwin have missed your work. It is up to each of us as individuals to recover and be the person we want to be and that God wants us to be. No one else can do this. Well done. |
Olwin this was a poem that lifted my spirits, and made me go yesss that's so true. Your wording was soft and simple but the meaning was loud and clear. |
by Meena Krish
Olwin its so good to read your poem after along time! |
by Ronel McCarthy
Meaningful acroustic well done |
by Lonely Rider
Very beautiful and an inspring write... I loved how you have put across the message in simple yet profound write :) |
by Paul Gondwe
I must say, you have made me fall in love with acroustic poems. The way you put your words, the rhyming pattern, its all superb. |
by Kuro
I liked the simple rhymes. it made it seem like a children song to sing and inspire them to do their best. much enjoyed |
Another great poem! I just love this style of writing. |