Please don't ever leave
If you do I promise to run after you

Ha ha. I would do the same, it's cute! It's appealing, warm-hearted, sincere and reassuring. Those are all the things a typical girl likes. :P I'm sure the person you wrote this for would love to read this. ^_^ I do know this feeling all too well!

Good one :)

No one could ever love you better then I can
Would you take my hand and run away with me?
love this last part, and the answer is blowing in the wind?

Oh my goodness this is so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!! Its amazing! <3

Its a very cute poem

and it really shows true love because thats what you do if you really love a person.....chase them lol

nice poem

This was a nice and sweet poem. Liked the way you expressed your emotions here for someone. Nice write. :)

I love this poem. I love the idea of lost love coming back and possibly giving you a second chance.

x

Awww how sweet, lovely poem, flawless :)

I want to leave some constructive criticism on this piece.

While the poem shows your love and emotion for this person, it lacks direction...
First off, the lack of punctuation makes the poem loose its flow...due to us not being able to read the poem in the way you intend.

and it seems cliche in parts...while it has potential, a couple of changes would do well to direct it

But a nice intentional piece that gets the message across.

Its sweet to the ears. Such confidence in declaring you're the best she can have. And such guts to ask her to elope with you. There's this innocence attached to this piece that got me smiling. The message is clear but a little more polish will give it a poetic touch. Keep writing. Cheers! :)

This is a sweet, direct poem. The simplicity of your words emphasized the importance of your love for this person. I could feel how much you needed this person and want her to give you a chance.

Good job!

Wow simply beautiful