Wow this poem shows how u r really obsessed with poetry, great poem Andrea:)

^_^ -Applauds!-

This 'Obsession' is easy to guess! & You made it seem so easy to pin-point all perfect words and explanation in 3 stanzas! This shows passion and glee! :D I'm happy that you share your work with us. Wonderful!

5/5

Obsessions can be bad at sometimes, but this one doesn't look bad to me. Unless it's really tormenting you which I doubt.

Mmm.. Quite an original read. I like the title and how you defined your obsession. But the last stanza was the best in my opinion, i like how you said you should run away from colons!!! At many time, i find myself struggling not to use punctuation a lot. And the venom of exclamation mark.. That's cool. I like this a lot.

I love how you have repeated your first line and made it your last. It really expresses how you feel about your poetry. I love how you say that you don't want to be devoured by the ending of a period. As if to say that is not all you have to say even after you have the ...

It makes me think that you will keep writing. Your obsession will not end for poetry is deep in your skin! I lovvve this!!!

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We are so glad you have this obsession :) it brings us the pleasure of reading good works.
Don't try to kick this addiction it's a good thing for all

Some obsessions are bad, some are good...but this obsession is the best!! speaks the truth indeed.. :)

What can i say but BRAVO!!! No amount of words can quantify my love for your poems. You're truly an inspiration to me. Sister, your just too much. Loads of love, blessings to you. :-). Hugs.