This is very good but Jst to mention in verse one line three is it meant to read "and one will be left behind" not "and one will left behind"? |
by tiger girl
Lovely poem, very beautiful. Don't really understand the first stanza in relation to the rest of poem, might just be me as i havn't slept in a week. Well done, love the title very appropiate |
by Shadow
Great poem! Gave me something to think about. Thanx |
by Dark
Thx glad you like it :D |