Comments : Feel what is real (Prose)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    I love the words you used in this poem.

    "Love flows like an endless stream, rejuvenating as it grows; tumbling over a fall into a glistening, sapphire bayou. " amazingly put. Love really is an endless stream <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    I love the words you used in this poem.

    "Love flows like an endless stream, rejuvenating as it grows; tumbling over a fall into a glistening, sapphire bayou. " amazingly put. Love really is an endless stream <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Excellent work, Michael..what a beautifully crafted piece of art! :)

    ((hugs))

    Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Very beautifully written! Thanks a lot for sharing! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael, you have "prose" in brackets next to the title of this piece but this is one of the most poetic pieces of prose I have ever had the pleasure to read. What lovely work.

  • 5 years ago

    by Vanesa

    Sexy.