by DarkLight Mar 12, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I know you can be wild, |
I will start with some critique - I feel this poem is too long. I feel it went on a bit. I believe you could made this more attactive to the reader if you had made this shorter. |
by DarkLight
Fly away |
by Wicked Ways
"Then we will all have to remain faithful to each other. |