Undying love

by DarkLight   Mar 12, 2012


I know you can be wild,
wild without me still,
you can do it.
Yes,
you know.
It is a matter of time
before killing my weakening smile,
ruthlessly and in a way
I believe.

I walk alone,
even my shadow has given up on my many unfolding dreams.
I walk alone,
with the little I got.
Still to you I beg,
let my soul live.
Even if it will cost my joy and happiness,
let me embrace the freedom of love
before my last breath.

I walk alone,
I the dying soul.
I watch the gates of heaven,
as well as hell's as they open.
I stagger,
not sure where I belong.
The love that was there,
is just an invaded cycle
to blindfold me.

Bring this to an end,
let it be the end of unhappy moments.
Maybe another heart will shelter me.
Will offer me the love I have been wanting.

Let go,
let go off my heart,
help me not dwell in my past.
It is my heart,
that wants to be released,
a bare heart with no love,
you don't even need it,
do you?
yes,
I saw it far away,
the answer,
even before I thought of the question.
Let it be time,
see it enough of the harm you have caused me.

Do not let my heart die in the wrath of your hands,
this wrath you call love.
Blow it away,
leave it suspended in the air.
Where my dead soulmate will embrace it,
and give it the love it deserves.
Then,
and only then,
will I wake up to a new dawn.
A soothing sunlight,
a playful wind that carries the scents of the altar,
where love gives back the prior sacrifice.
Where rains brings down blessings,
and traump with the thunderstorms.
Where lightning breaks the truth,
where beauty of colorful clouds judges my feelings.
Then we will all have to remain faithful to each other.
Then,
and only then,
will I wake up to a brighter world,
world filled with undying love.

�©Shanky.net.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I will start with some critique - I feel this poem is too long. I feel it went on a bit. I believe you could made this more attactive to the reader if you had made this shorter.

    On the plus side I liked your choice of words and the emotiona in the piece. I could see a lot of time of and effort went into this and I loved your title. It was simple yet drew me to the poem

    Over all I don't view as a bad poem. I really enjoyed it even if I was a little put off by the length.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Fly away

    tz pourin of emotions.n thanx fr ua comment

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    "Then we will all have to remain faithful to each other.
    Then,
    and only then,
    will I wake up to a brighter world,
    world filled with undying love."

    I absolutely love this poem it definitely portrays undying love, i really love the ending to this, to remain faithful, its hard to get there once you were unfaithful, so much broken trust, in anyway way too, really makes you think but this poem really felt like a "pouring" of your emotions.. nicely done :)