"Then we will all have to remain faithful to each other.
Then,
and only then,
will I wake up to a brighter world,
world filled with undying love."

I absolutely love this poem it definitely portrays undying love, i really love the ending to this, to remain faithful, its hard to get there once you were unfaithful, so much broken trust, in anyway way too, really makes you think but this poem really felt like a "pouring" of your emotions.. nicely done :)

Fly away

tz pourin of emotions.n thanx fr ua comment

I will start with some critique - I feel this poem is too long. I feel it went on a bit. I believe you could made this more attactive to the reader if you had made this shorter.

On the plus side I liked your choice of words and the emotiona in the piece. I could see a lot of time of and effort went into this and I loved your title. It was simple yet drew me to the poem

Over all I don't view as a bad poem. I really enjoyed it even if I was a little put off by the length.

5/5