What a magnificent poem!I cannot find flaw in your grammar or formatting, your words flow eloquently, what a beautiful description of mankind and his mortality.my favourite lines.."those who judge, judge not themselves, for they are blind,grey hearted, heart of bone long fossiled, aching stone, no longer human, misunderstood and living by the blade"this part could be a poem of it's own it's so beautiful, so chilling and so perfect!