Beside the grammatical errors i saw, its a soothing poem. Im on the phone so i cant copy lines but the first stanza has some plural and singular issues and the second one has the word 'air' a lot.. But good, ole. Nice portray of love for mother nature

Hi
I try to find the errors, and thanks for you great effort and comments

I am not sure you really mean nature, perhaps a person as a metaphor

You are a cleaver guy, of cores it is love in a woman

Your love poems are so tender and delicate. They are so soothing and I really enjoy them. Some errors but still flow nicely

Lovely, flowing poem. Peaceful and serene.

Great job

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Thanks for your kind comment, please note the errors for correction love Ole