Virgin

What a nature beauty! The author describes what nature is: beautiful, innocent, and untouched- Love the title! This piece is elegant, soft and just breathtaking. What is more pure than a waterfall? I can visualize the water fall flowing and ending in an enchanting pond. The mixture of stars and lilies dancing made ME feel like dancing... the entire nature scene is right in front of my eyes as I'm reading. The Poet simply dazzled me... and left me feeling peaceful. I truly felt like I was in paradise, well done TJ-

This was beautiful and very interesting. I loved how it was very descriptive without sounding like you were trying too hard. great job! and thanks for commenting on my poems...i would love it if u could read my poem called "By His Side" cuz I really respect your opinion.

TJ,
The use of azure is kind of hard in my opinion to pull off in a poem. It usually lacks the kind of flow most words put off. With that being said, you have done an amazing job with this. The imagery is stunning as only you and very few can do when writing nature poems.

Nature is pure, breathtaking, and unstoppable. Lovely poem, 5/5

mandy :)

A delightful read, the title catches one but the content is a twist but very consuming. What a beautiful description of 'waterfall' you made here. I like the smooth flow and your wordings were just marvelous. However, though this is a nature theme it can be incorporated into the title 'virgin' but indirectly. I love this; undiluted water flowing in a serene aura, pure and natural. Excellent, blessings to you, Cheers!