I thought this was a nicely written poem. Liked your metaphors used here. It actually at first reminded me of a werewolf when you described "him" there. Nice write :)

It's interesting how the whole rhythm of this poem make you words sound uplifting, but when one truly reads the words themselves, (s)he'll realise that the content is anything but fluffy (especially the first two stanzas). You surely have a thing for rhyming pieces, when you rhyme it seems so very easy to pull off! It's very natural (and of course your accent would go perfectly with this *wink*). I wish I had something to say that made sense ...