by Decayed
Omg Liz... I never read something with such organic warmth and unrestrained flow... This is purely amazing... Bella... The name itself echoes in my mind because of its crisp melody. And the poem, it feels like heaven because im listening now to Hello World (lady Antebellum) while reading. I just wasted my nominations... It's totally going into my favorites. Lovely and mesmerizing. |
by L
Liz, Liz. |
by Maple Tree
Oh Dolphins are precious and this poem is so pretty ~ |
Liz this poem is really beautiful! I wish I was lucky enough to swim with a dolphin then again I can't swim :( but I am glad you got the chance to swim with one and I loved the beautiful poem you created because of it. |
by Mostafa
Really amazing, it flows with tender and warm rhythm and the title just like Abed said, it echoes and the name Bella brings up memories so I definitely liked it so much : ) |
by Tara Kay
Dolphins are such sensual crwatures, and the beauty of them really shone through in this, It must be a life-changing, amazing experience, to cherish always.... |
by Lifeless Doll
Oh wow, very very beautiful :) dolphins are wonderful creautures and you described them very well, this is lovely |
The best experience of my life was feeding and petting a dolphin but to swim with one would be ideal |
by Muran
How much you more merge with the nature, you are more merging to life, great piece of work. |
by Steven Croat
This must be an remembrance forever... |
I certainly loved the poem and adored it even more so knowing what you were talking about before reading the end caption. I only felt like there was one draw back in this entire stunning piece....the use of the word "rubber" seemed distracting to such a beautiful porpoise. That however is the only thing that held me back. This poem is beautiful and I too would love to swim with a dolphin, Lucky You! |