This is an amazing poem! I love it darl!!!!!!!! 5/5!

This must be some sort of ritual? It sounded very calm and tranquil and I took achy eyes as being something that just happened because of the candle burning? I'm not really sure if I've got the true meaning behind this one but....it's definately an intriguing piece.

A perfect piece, love it

Ole

That is xo beautiful of u maple..greatly defined piece.

I found this piece to be sad sort of with a melancholic tone but still with hope that a better tomorrow will come. I see achy eyes like when one spends the night crying then they tend to hurt.

I love this poem. I read it and it sounds like a recipe or spell for happiness to come your way. I love the words said and it flows so easy.

Awesome poem hun

x

WOW this piece is precious, it speaks volumes... sadness, love, hope... amazing!

"Love me like there
Is no tomorrow",
his whispers linger,
as eyelids sing a lullaby.
^^
this poem had really touched my heart, especially this stanza:)
Sad poem, but as always perfectly written:)I love it

Burning a dragons blood
hand made from a willow
I desire comfort from
worry and sorrow.

I think this is very powerful well-done :)