I simply love this........so sweet .........brutally honest assessment......touching the essence of being human...being yourself in a box of your own . I love this romantic stuff !

He is a lucky man to have such a great woman backing him. This is one of the best you've written to date.

5/5 and a nomination from yours truly.

I'll add a critique later.

Trying to find something I don't like here
is exhausting............................brb

I don't know what to feel, here, except envying you for such a brave heart that is never afraid of portraying your inside. And enving you for such a man, do not ever let go of him. Those kind of men are precious, you won't really know their preciousness enough till they're lost. I'm sure he appreciated this so much. Describing him honestly. Can you believe that I just broke up with my boyfriend, still felt the pureness of love? I was reminded of details I never experienced, yet dreamt of. I'm so sad yet amazed at the moment. Feeling not the need to be loved after this piece. Perhaps for some this is just a love piece, submitted to catch some attention. For me, this is more than poetry, this is the sweet selflessness people rarely do appreciate. You are good, no, you are a goddess, when it comes to this kind of poetry. This needs not someone to analyze it, it's clear and easily understood. I just commented to tell you that yes, he is a man worth keeping. Breath-taking poetry, Jane.

Someone seems to be puking wins lately ;)

Way to go girl! :D

Do you know, what really crossed my mind while reading this beautiful, heartfelt poem ? My India poem, those traits, aren't only rare to find in a man, but are also traits you'd find in some of the "real" indian guy, Amandeep, is someone I can never ever forget, no matter how hard I try, I know it's no possible. The person i am talking about it, is somehow, 98% the way you penned your man over here. Born with his own ethics pasted all in his heart!

This isn't just a front page poem, it's also a beautiful message, and a very overwhelming love gesture, for he, who's meant :]

Well done, nothing is more perfect!

This was so emotional and coming from a honest place. I loved it for it's sincerity. It would be awesome if u could check out some of new writes :)

Its very emotional I loved it.