Nice rhyming, and nice style in approaching your idea.
I like this a lot:

I run to your rescue.
You aren't there
I lost you.
My world has shattered,
I see no need to live.
I choose to die,
but for whose love?

^ I think it should be 'which love?'

Yours?
No.
Hers?
No.

^ I like such styles in poems, fast, and delivers the message, the thoughts, the images quite quickly and smoothly. Great one!

Beautifully written :)

Thanx Leb..wil correct that..i appreciate

This poem is full of heartbreak and the pain can be felt with your words, they are sharp and direct.

The last part of the poem made me feel completely sad. Especially at the idea of suicide.

Very sad indeed.

Awesome poem though. Loved reading it.

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This poem is absolutely stunning. The sheer amount of raw emotion took my breath away. The way you took the stanza's and changed them, it was a very interesting read.
I love it! 5/5!

I do like this poem but I feel your layout is off putting to the reader.

That said I liked how you told a story and the imagery you created.

I found this to be a very emotional piece so 5/5