SMS poem in happiness

Thanks for the kind comment, yes I have send this as a SMS poem, and it was well recieved, smiling
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Ole

In one SMS, the is great

Thanks for the kind advice and comment

I liked your wording, and the simple wording that seems genuine and tender..One suggestion''change
Guess you does that to me?
to
Guess you do that to me?

creative and original...good job

I liked the simplicity but I guess these couple of lines needs modification
"staying in a foreign country makes me an emigrant, wanting to stay there makes gives me happiness, inside me is no boarder, no lines, no barriers except one human respect."
maybe you meant staying there gives me happiness cause this didn't fit in my mind