by Mostafa
I liked the simplicity but I guess these couple of lines needs modification |
I liked your wording, and the simple wording that seems genuine and tender..One suggestion''change |
by Ole Carsten
Thanks for the kind advice and comment |
by Odin Ebbesen
In one SMS, the is great |
by Ole Carsten
Thanks for the kind comment, yes I have send this as a SMS poem, and it was well recieved, smiling |