Comments : Eternal Pit

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I feel like crying.
    Its really a perfectly written poem, gd job:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    I am crying.....
    Please, Don't do this....

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    I loved this poem sad but I still enjoyed the beatiful read(:

    Great job darl(:
    5/5

    XX

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    This makes me wanna cry but its soo good 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Dark and chilling, good job bro

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    You have a way with words, that can break a heart and bring tears. You have no idea the things you could do through your very words
    Though sad and chilling it's beautifully written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    This was a good write. its very emotional and very sad.

  • 12 years ago

    by silvertung69

    I really like your style.i had to read it twice to get the beat. but i got it . vary deep

  • 12 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    I like your dark poetry. Darkness seems a welcomed friend to you 5/5