My story is done.

I can relate to this. You put it in writing, I kept putting it in my body.
there was a deep struggle going on inside this write I felt.
emotions reaching out
sorry I didn't get around sooner but spend very little time anymore
but I'll do better...honest
dan

oh yes, did you succeed in cleaning up the pill thing. if not maybe I could help a little. not soliciting just concerned. pm me if so.
no monkey business honest.

Very short. very sad. great job!

Okay this is short and sweet (in a dark sense). I love it though. Without saying they're pills, we know they are because the first line mentions you crying. You then go on to explain that all that's left in your life is the agony of waiting for the mercy of death.

The next stanza I felt was better than the first, full of strong and concise emotion. The imagery could have been stronger with more adjectives, however with the curt nature of the poem I think it fit very nicely. The last line I felt was a perfect line to end with, it was clearly a conclusion, plus it sort of left me thinking. Well done.

Nice short poem!I loved it!

Wow is all can say
makes alot of sense though love it :)