Dushi,

why don't you divide this into short Stanza's
it would make it a little more appealing to the eyes.. and what easier to read.

don't change anything about its content
tho, Its so gorgeous..

everything..

I love the "not having you became second nature"

fsaakjkrktlth darn.

you are one talented lady,
I'm so glad you got vacuumed into my virtual world..

YES.
riba magia preto hasi bruheria.
'on to black magic...

(Sorry, its a rule..we can only speak english here :p so had to post translation)