by Natusha Mar 13, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Day 1 |
This is quite clever. I really loved this because indeed it does tell a story and in a different way. Your lines are still poetic in their own way though not written in stanzas. I see this as a dairy of your emotions & observations. A a comparison of one day to the next. I feel they transition nicely into this story you wish to tell. Nice write, you write with a different style, I like it. |