I love jazz, and the blues. Blending the music with the poetry is so natural. I liked the theme, the flow, wording was excellent and the format was eye catching..
Good write

The poem flows well just like Jazz music would. I like Jazz, it can be soothing and relaxing.

Awesome poem

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The best thing I like in the poem is the tension you built with your style and words, especially recording the time.. It feels that you are weary.. maybe subtly.

good!

This is a lovely poem. I like the elngth and the way you drew the reader in from the first line.

5/5