Should I Jump?

by The strangest thing   Mar 13, 2012


Should I Jump
Will that take away the pain
Should I Jump
Is it easier this way
Should I Jump
Was this meant to be my fate
I make my decision
In a spilt second or two
As I let go of the bridge
And fall to the sea
Where it will engulf me
I finally decide this is how
Its meant to be
Dealing with a broken soul
With no one to tell
All the pain inside I held
I decided to end it
Set my soul free
Maybe it would be better without me

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  • 12 years ago

    by Songbird

    I love the last line because thats how I totally feel... what a sad poem, it broke my heart to read. You're a very emotional writer and I love that, its the best thing in poetry I think... Like everyone said dont give up! I know its hard but you will be okay.

    xx Blaire

  • 12 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    I love this. It is amazing and I know how you feel. Just try to live life at the fullest and don't let people bring you down. :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow, this is an absolutely amazing poem. It seems to show just how lost you seem to feel :) I love it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    This is sad. good poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rohit Sapra

    Please do not give up on this life. It is not easy to live, still please try to live.

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