It's a gorgeous write, I love how you sculpted it....
As for the theme, I'm not gonna say just hold on its gonna be okay... only because I'm thinking about doing the same thing right now....

Please do not give up on this life. It is not easy to live, still please try to live.

This is sad. good poem.

Wow, this is an absolutely amazing poem. It seems to show just how lost you seem to feel :) I love it!

I love this. It is amazing and I know how you feel. Just try to live life at the fullest and don't let people bring you down. :) 5/5

I love the last line because thats how I totally feel... what a sad poem, it broke my heart to read. You're a very emotional writer and I love that, its the best thing in poetry I think... Like everyone said dont give up! I know its hard but you will be okay.

xx Blaire