This was very loving and tender. I love the mention of angel wings, somehow love and angels just make a good comparison.
Very nice and soothing write..:)

"How your beauty will be heated
by the mold of a spring day,
how innocently- unknowingly
you will leave my sight."

^Gorgeous.

I really don't know how you can write so much amazing things in one day.

Girl your poetry is so innocent and sincere,
I mean yes many people write of love
but somehow, to me it does not always sounds honest.some just want to make a poem so good it loses feelings, it seems forced.

but your writes are often so effortless,
so....its like, I can't explain

your writes always have a certain aura to them, a soothing one... your word choice is always soft, and I can see you as someone who wants to give a comforting kind of love.

the ending was quite gorgeous too,
so calm and hopeful!

love it honey!