by Kiko
I like poems about Spring and renewal. |
I have to go with Kiko on this it's really good to see your poems again. Spring is so new , when they say rebirth that's just it .. |
by Maple Tree
I'm a tree hugger!!!!!!! Ohhh I love this poem Ingrid! The sweetness and freshness of new buds on a tree is so beautiful.... awesome!! |
by L
It's really interesting to observe the changes from nature because they can also be seeing in us. The new buds From the tree. |
by Ingrid
Thanks for the sweet comments! |
by Muran
Great write, you touched nature so deeply. |
by yogi73
Hi Ingrid - as always, love your poem. So full of wisdom and life. |
by Lostlove1
Hi Ingrid :) so nice to see you writing again. I know you used the tree as a metaphor for yourself, I see this as a time of being reborn (as parts of you died all fall and winter) things that hurt you are the branches that become brittle. Using that exact pain you buried has made you stronger and its showing....I think its about loving yourself again. :) Hugs Ingrid. Dont think I am too far off. Very nice :) |
This is absolutely engrossing. Using nature to describe the subjects despairing state thus hope surfaces; turning gloom into glee. It's very metaphorical and the rhythm is smooth like a smoothie. Crystal clear imagery, the reader can see the unfolding of the events and the feeling of sadness and happiness revolving within the poem. I love this poem so much beyond your thoughts. With humble respect, blessings to you. Cheers! :-) |
by Lifeless Doll
Well this is a really good methaphor, the use of nature here is really good :) |
by mandy
I really loved this poem, it made me feel something. 5/5 |
by Ronel McCarthy
Lovely poem about nature and what we learn from it...........the hope .......rebirth.........what can grow out of 'compost'.......very deep. :) |
by kelleyana
It's a long time i havn't red any of your poems and i am glad to read this one. You always thought us something through your poems. You are one of those poet, that for me are among the best poets. I really enjoy my read. Enjoy your day. Kel. |
by Xanthe
'In the garden, near the river |
Nery Nicely Penned Ingrid!!! |
This is a great poem about nature, but then it is also so much more! It sounds as if it is a metaphor for your life (perhaps why you placed it in 'Poems about life'..?) - like you are that tree growing and changing throughout the seasons and finally coming out at the other side brand new and whole again, and no one would ever guess that you were so vulnerable for a short while. |
by ddavidd
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of may,... |