Complete it cuz its really good:)

Oh yes yes this is like a chess board, but somehow this made me think of harry potter :p yknow the scene. lol but in a serious note, this really made me think. . .

nice poem :)

I'm not sure how this made you think of harry potter, was it my hair that gave it away or was it the scar on my forehead hehe lol

No lol it reminded me of harry potter because in one of the movies they play human chess board or whatever.

Hehe lol............yeah i haven't really seen much of the harry potter movies o.O i guess life is like a chess board, its depends on your moves and decisions you take in life that determines your path :)

Im really glad you completed it, its really good:)
I enjoyed reading it:)

I love this one.... <3 it I think ab something like this lol I wish I can be the best like you

Good poem but you could have used some imagery based on the chessboard
That way people have an easier time reading it

5/5

Good this poem is soo meaningfull with a strong mesage liked it :)

If you don't get your own way
the world will never be the same,
your feelings will simply tell you
that will turn out true, but who's to blame

this waxs my favorite part 5/5 keep it up