I lovvvvvvvve this. Such a beautiful poem and the flow is just magical. I could really envision the sunset and how peaceful it would look. This is such a gorgeous piece. I am in awe of the words and how it made me feel reading it.

Beautiful. This poem was well writen and has great imagery and personification. I loved it, i actually saw you asking the sun..lol...great work

This reads like the fairy tales I read as a child, I especially like the last stanza

My lover smiles and waves at me
resting within limbs of a maple,
his autumn gaze Intoxicates the soul
and the pain becomes a faded memory....

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I could somehow see this in my minds eye and feel the yearning in your heart..

Very nice work!

5/5 Ingrid

I'm not quite sure what I think but I liked it,, it's good and greatly worded,,amazing word choice