Treehouse

I love the poem , but i think it should have been a quote instead.

Oh I do love the secret hideaway of a tree house.... nothing more peaceful than resting high within tree limbs.... I do love and adore short, formed, powerful poems... this poem has the syllabic count of a senryu... very very nice!!

Your poems though short always hold much meaning. Each of us have a tree house though symbolic, nice one

To be completely honest.... this seems like more of a quote than a poem to me... Could you possibly expand on what makes you want to hide away from the world? or maybe expand on how being in the treehouse feels?

If you do that... It'd be more like a poem to me.