To be completely honest.... this seems like more of a quote than a poem to me... Could you possibly expand on what makes you want to hide away from the world? or maybe expand on how being in the treehouse feels? |
Your poems though short always hold much meaning. Each of us have a tree house though symbolic, nice one |
by Maple Tree
Oh I do love the secret hideaway of a tree house.... nothing more peaceful than resting high within tree limbs.... I do love and adore short, formed, powerful poems... this poem has the syllabic count of a senryu... very very nice!! |
by neon sunset
I love the poem , but i think it should have been a quote instead. |