Dancing in love

by Ole Carsten   Mar 15, 2012


Dancing in dream light

First careful step
Entering the dance floor
Lifting your arm
Placing my arm at your
naked back.

Waiting for the first tune,
Smiling with blood rushing,
My mind set for the best,
Ready for a performance,
Never felt before.

Your fragrance,
is hitting my nostrils,
it makes me feel inspired.
First tune is hitting my ears,
We are taking the first step.

Dancing like this,
Is like making love,
In thin air,
Exciting and demanding.
Swirling around weightless.

The melody is slowing down,
Counting down,
Last swirl are at hand,
Your smile is energy
Last step now,

Love is giving wings...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks for the kind comment
    br
    Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Love this poem, great work

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Mostafa

    What a kind comment, thanks a lot

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Wow, this piece shows profound and powerful feelings yet you formed it in a sweet and delicate way
    I loved it, well done :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Sensual yet sweet, I like how you relates making love to dancing I think that this piece flows well and keep the reader attention. Good poem

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