I like that the poem refers to nature and I also like the use of sactem, sounds like santurium. Or something like that a sacred place.

I really liked the start of this verse but...I would have started it..My Home! My Home! just to emphasise it.

Yggdrasils

Well this is a good word to use but...I just felt it was misplaced in this poem?

The rest of the poem had some lovely imagery in it although, personally, I'd change lagoon to loch...I've never come across a lagoon in Scotland?

I did enjoy reading this one.

Of mine heart you sing.. My land lies below yours, a small boat row away... But your woods are the same as mine. And I remember the path